Worth uploading the clip w/ spacing the way it originally happened, or is this good as-is?
My recommendation, assuming you have a few moments, would be to trim the clip to just the full clearance and leave off the corrections. Also, if you know how I would also drop the bitrate to 16kbps. Both of these actions will result in a small file for those on limited bandwidths, but quality won't be affected.
Agree on the bandwidth, I really hadn't noticed that.
Half of the reason I posted the clip in the first place was for the "intersection BOTOX" bit, so I'd prefer to leave that in there. Think I should chop the correction in-between?